I agree with Jeff, Duck comments, Violin Girl is not in the same area as with Family Portraits, Also Pick the best of each grouping and show only your best shots, more is not better. You only have a few moments to make your best impression on a potential client, they will form their opinion quickly, and reinforment of thier conclusion is in your variety,... of your best of each catagory.
I also agree with Nanette's comments regrading the reverse vignetting. I can see the appeal of the style in some of the heavy backlighted shots, but the effect on the lower part of the picture doesn't make sense and doesn't enhance the effect on the top part of the picture. You might play with both a reverse V, on the top part and darkening V, on the lower portions. (make two duplicates of the background layer, apply the Reverse V on one and Reg V on the other, Black mask them both, and selectively paint the efx in where appropriate.) (For thoses who are thinking "How do you do that?"
Over really good feeling your your pictures, and good compositions, too.
Don't stop dancing!.....